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Becky's Poetry notebook
« Thread Started on Nov 23, 2005, 4:22pm »
Here is a poem i conjured up - poem no 1
Death in the face

I remember your face each day,
it brings me sadness and anger,
that someone could have done this to you.

I light the candle and kneel,
beside your grave and weep,
the tears stain my face as i remember.

I see a light coming towards me,
with a knife in a bloody hand,
i am gone, i am gone, i am gone...
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« Reply #1 on Feb 17, 2006, 12:14pm »
Ok here is another poem i did about Johnny Depp character Gene Watson

I saw the face of my daughter, so sweet, so innocent,
Bundled into a van with strangers,
I was so scared, but my insides were screaming with rage,
Don't hurt her, don't hurt her!

They placed a crayon in her hand,
I wanted to snatch it away,
But i knew if i did she could loose her life,
I sighed and my daughter began to draw,
I glanced at Smith, i knew i had to do it,
I got out of the van and began walking...
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